Showing posts with label 55 Words. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 55 Words. Show all posts

Tuesday, March 16, 2010

Expressionless ...

Walking along the aisle he noticed her. She wore an exquisite top with a short skirt. His eyes widened appreciating her beauty.

“You’re the most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen.” he said to her. There was no response.

He laughed.

“Too bad a poster can’t talk... wanted to see her blush and smile a bit.”

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This is really, my first try on 55 word fiction. Sorry if it sounds too common... it's a pain in the neck for me to write anything with a small word limit.

And I guess the protagonist is a lonely dreamer devoid of the joys of reality... or something like that.